Wednesday, September 5, 2018

academic papers (3 positives and negatives)


The role of writing in political Science

  • Positives
    • Very nice citations
    • Got good info out of interviewing people
    • I liked how the writer organized their writing
  • Negatives
    • Starting off with a quote.
    • Not a strong intro
    • The way they explain the quotes

Writing in psychology

  • Positives
    • I like how they introduced psych and explained that there are different field
    • Used direct sayings like “uh”
    • The wording flowed
  • Negative
    • Don’t underline the title of a book
    • The resources weren’t on a separate page
    • Did not format the paper properly
    • Used personal pronouns

Writing as a creative writer

  • Positives
    • Very strong intro
    • Formatting for quotes are correct
    •   Short and simple conclusion
  • Negatives
    • Some sub titles are centered some are not
    • Some tops are bolded, and some aren’t
    • Some topics are very short

Writing in economics

  • Positives
    • Very strong academic and non academic section
    • Used various sources
    • Introduced academic and non before writing about it
  • Negatives
    • Personally I don’t like starting off papers with questions
    • Only talked about what econ is not about the writing in the intro
    • Only really talked about academic and non-academic

 

 

The role of writing in engineering

  • Positives
    • Was reaching out to the teacher for help
    • Explained everything they added
    •  
  • negatives
    • I like to start off with a good after noon
    • I don’t like how he just said I’m writing to you because…
    • Did not proof read the paper

The role of writing in engineering

  • Positives
    • APA heading good with the running header on the first page
    •  Strong intro
    • Good sub topics
  • Negative
    • Personally, don’t like starting with quotes
    • Use better word choice
    • Some areas sound repetitive

Writing in the business discipline

  • Positives
    • Noticed his flaws
    • Used a running heading
    • Good sub topics
  • Negatives
    • Should have quoted “what  a senior would do”
    • I don’t like starting with quotes
    • Formatting was not correct

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