Overall, the papers format and language use was great. The word choice was never repetitive and also professional. Furthermore, you did a great job of following the Apa guidelines and staying consistent throughout your paper. The overall layout of the paper followed the IMRaD format perfectly. The abstract is great it is brad but covers the main ideas of the essay I would just take out the specific statistics and save those for the results paragraph. The introduction was great with all the sources used. Could have identified the gap a little more in the intro paragraphs. The methods were described in great detail and explain the survey very well. The results section was laid out very well and provided great graphs depicting the results. The only thing that could be improved is labeling the tables. Overall, your paper was great and it followed the guidelines very well. great job!
This essay was very straight across and to the point. I loved the idea you had for this paper. I edited the grammar which was the biggest part that needed to be fixed. Other than that I think it was well written. You had all the parts that was needed and the organization of the entire paper was on point. Your paper had everything that was needed. It was easy to follow. I liked how many graphs you had because it gave a ton more evidence for the reader and helped support the main point of your paper! Overall I think you did a very good job!
Overall, the papers format and language use was great. The word choice was never repetitive and also professional. Furthermore, you did a great job of following the Apa guidelines and staying consistent throughout your paper. The overall layout of the paper followed the IMRaD format perfectly. The abstract is great it is brad but covers the main ideas of the essay I would just take out the specific statistics and save those for the results paragraph. The introduction was great with all the sources used. Could have identified the gap a little more in the intro paragraphs. The methods were described in great detail and explain the survey very well. The results section was laid out very well and provided great graphs depicting the results. The only thing that could be improved is labeling the tables. Overall, your paper was great and it followed the guidelines very well.
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This essay was very straight across and to the point. I loved the idea you had for this paper. I edited the grammar which was the biggest part that needed to be fixed. Other than that I think it was well written. You had all the parts that was needed and the organization of the entire paper was on point. Your paper had everything that was needed. It was easy to follow. I liked how many graphs you had because it gave a ton more evidence for the reader and helped support the main point of your paper! Overall I think you did a very good job!
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